![]() ![]() It's nice to introduce the characters' routines, and young adults in high school go to parties, but having like four parties during the narrative sounds tiresome and repetitive. ![]() ![]() Basically, they suffer from disappointments about love and difficulties at school, but it would be nice to open the range and see them beyond that. It would be interesting to see a little more drama and conflict among these young people. If the plot is not that diverse, then the characters, the interactions between friends, the love relationship, or the narrative's tone could be more original to stand out. Many movies and series already have this same premise. It's a love story between two teenagers who will end up choosing different cities to study, and will drift apart. First, it needs an element that made it memorable, that made it stand out in the midst of so many love stories. ![]()
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